Thank you, Edith! I've been stressed over finishing this story all week. I wrote it so fast I wasn't sure if it was good or not. So pleased to it seems to have worked out. Your response made all the stress worth it. Thank you! Looking forward to reading yours!
It's a dumpster fire. I tried something different, wanted to speak to the younger generations. We'll see what happens. 👀 it's all experimental. You wrote lovely. Pat yourself on the back no stress needed. It had fluidity and flowed well. I would love to see it on film.
Just finished your story and absolutely loved it. The experimental style gave it a fast, frenetic feel that seemed to mirror the feeling of living in our digital age. I adore your descriptions. So many lines I wish I wrote myself.
Thanks, Jon! So relieved you enjoyed it! I wrote it in a fever, so I couldn't tell if it was good or not. I can't wait to read yours! It seems I missed the part about posting at 12:01 PST. 😅
Dude WHAAAT - so cool. My favorite part of this TZ project is seeing how each authors voice shines through the same lens, this story is so you and so good and so TZ
Thank you, Keith! Glad you enjoyed it! And, yes, I agree. These stories and their authors have been so incredible. I’m really enjoying how everyone’s unique voice shines through. I still have a handful of stories left to read. The gift that keeps on giving.
Beginning at the end, then scrambling the time-line was brilliant. Couldn't stop reading. Authentic characters bring the story to life. First rate, William.
Well, shit on a shingle that was fantastic! I had no idea what to expect but the non-linear structure works amazing. Every scene had a laugh, a hmmm or a GAH! You’ve got some chops, man! Now I gotta go check out the extended version.
Ah man, thank you! Especially with the all the amazing stories that came out today, this is the highest of compliments. 🍻 I've had a pretty busy day today, but I will be reading all the stories on the list as soon as possible. Looking forward to yours! Can't wait.
Well done, homie. This was my first read of the event, and it'll be tough to top! Your story had a great mix of old TZ, Black Mirror, and Bradbury--done in a 100% WP3 way. Loved it!
Thanks, EJ! Glad you dug it! I was worried the decision to jumble the chapters wouldn't work as well as I was hoping. I can't tell you how relieved I am to hear it worked for you. 🫠🍻
Tihs was my first pull from the Substack Zone stack and wow, what a start to my Sunday morning! It was a killer story (pun intended), and the way you parted it out is genius. Solid.
Thank you, Shane! So kind of you to say! Happy you enjoyed this weird tale. 🫠🍻 I'm still making my way through the list of stories. I'm sure this event will keep me entertained all week long! So many great stories.
WOW. This was just amazing as always. Blown away. I loved the twists and turns. Just absolutely amazed by it. Gorgeous writing.
I am speechless.
It moved me. Pressing save on it. The best damn thing I've read all day.
Thank you, Edith! I've been stressed over finishing this story all week. I wrote it so fast I wasn't sure if it was good or not. So pleased to it seems to have worked out. Your response made all the stress worth it. Thank you! Looking forward to reading yours!
It's a dumpster fire. I tried something different, wanted to speak to the younger generations. We'll see what happens. 👀 it's all experimental. You wrote lovely. Pat yourself on the back no stress needed. It had fluidity and flowed well. I would love to see it on film.
Just finished your story and absolutely loved it. The experimental style gave it a fast, frenetic feel that seemed to mirror the feeling of living in our digital age. I adore your descriptions. So many lines I wish I wrote myself.
so weird and creepy and good!
loved the twisty timeline - perfecto
Thanks, Jon! So relieved you enjoyed it! I wrote it in a fever, so I couldn't tell if it was good or not. I can't wait to read yours! It seems I missed the part about posting at 12:01 PST. 😅
Dude WHAAAT - so cool. My favorite part of this TZ project is seeing how each authors voice shines through the same lens, this story is so you and so good and so TZ
Thank you, Keith! Glad you enjoyed it! And, yes, I agree. These stories and their authors have been so incredible. I’m really enjoying how everyone’s unique voice shines through. I still have a handful of stories left to read. The gift that keeps on giving.
Beginning at the end, then scrambling the time-line was brilliant. Couldn't stop reading. Authentic characters bring the story to life. First rate, William.
Thank you, K.C.! Much appreciated! 🍻 Thank you for subscribing!
Well, shit on a shingle that was fantastic! I had no idea what to expect but the non-linear structure works amazing. Every scene had a laugh, a hmmm or a GAH! You’ve got some chops, man! Now I gotta go check out the extended version.
Thank you, J! This is my first ‘shit on a shingle’ ever! This just made my entire week. So glad you enjoyed it! 🫠 🍻
this was a wild ride! loved the structure...the first scene had me absolutely hooked for the rest, having part one at the end was brilliant
Thank you so much, Will! 🍻 I'm still making my way through all these amazing stories. Very much looking forward to reading yours!
It’s like Christmas came early, they’re all so good
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"I have a Mr Serling on the other line. He says you have to put all the pieces back in the right order before they'll put it on the television."
Great work WP3, enjoyed it a lot.
😆 Thank you, A.P.! 🍻 Very much looking forward to your story!
Nice one. Built up to the end in a very satisfying manner. Like the Bradbury tie-in, too. Lot's of self doubt when it comes to those electric sheep.
♫♫ Despite all my rage...
Everything about this comment rocks my socks off. 🤘 Thank you, Xavier! Glad you dug this one!
Where can I get me one of those perfect robot wives?
Awesome story man...
Maybe Tesla? 😅 Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it! 🤘
Great story! A perfect TZ homage.
Thank you, Liz! 🫠🍻
Brilliant delivery of parts out of order (or really, in the *correct* order) to make it suck the reader into the surreal dimension!
Thank you so much, CB! So stoked you dug it. 🍻
Read it then I read it again.
Ah man, thank you! Especially with the all the amazing stories that came out today, this is the highest of compliments. 🍻 I've had a pretty busy day today, but I will be reading all the stories on the list as soon as possible. Looking forward to yours! Can't wait.
Well done, homie. This was my first read of the event, and it'll be tough to top! Your story had a great mix of old TZ, Black Mirror, and Bradbury--done in a 100% WP3 way. Loved it!
TZ, Black Mirror, and Bradbury! Damn. I guess I can quit writing now. It doesn't get any better than that. Thank you! Really happy you dug it. 🫠🍻
you wrote an action movie and I could see every frame. riveting story, compellingly told
Thanks, EJ! Glad you dug it! I was worried the decision to jumble the chapters wouldn't work as well as I was hoping. I can't tell you how relieved I am to hear it worked for you. 🫠🍻
it was expertly done. ✔️
So happy you think so. 🙃
Tihs was my first pull from the Substack Zone stack and wow, what a start to my Sunday morning! It was a killer story (pun intended), and the way you parted it out is genius. Solid.
Thank you, Shane! So kind of you to say! Happy you enjoyed this weird tale. 🫠🍻 I'm still making my way through the list of stories. I'm sure this event will keep me entertained all week long! So many great stories.
No doubt!