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M.Devereaux's avatar

I love your dialogue. It makes me laugh a lot!

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William Pauley III's avatar

Thank you! Glad you enjoy it. :)

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Pablo Báez's avatar

Fucking love it!

Chorizo, NV, is a place I’d like to visit.

I get Independence Day/Tremors vibes (from the characters), Randy Quaid in ID comes to mind.

The characters are fleshed out of slime, grease and ground meat.

Feels like a thriving ecosystem on its own. You could not read it and they would continue to live, just as if they were.

This is dope, dude!

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William Pauley III's avatar

Thank you! “The characters are fleshed out of slime, grease and ground meat.” This is the most accurate description ever written for my characters! Pete's fate (in my novella The Brothers Crunk) involves all three of these things! 😆

Glad you're digging the story!

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