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Sep 30Liked by William Pauley III

WTF, WP3! LOL! 🔥🔥🔥

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Wait till PART 2. 😅🤣

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Sep 30Liked by William Pauley III

Lol

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Sep 30Liked by William Pauley III

Is it weird that I started salivating? Excellent creep here mister. Delighted and disturbed.

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As long as you don't eat any children, I think it's okay. 🤷

Thank you! I'm pleased I can entertain an extremely talented writer, such as yourself. 🙏

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Sep 30·edited Sep 30Liked by William Pauley III

Do tadpoles count? It's all I could find.

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If eating tadpoles count, then we're both in trouble, my friend.

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Sep 30Liked by William Pauley III

*gulp

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🤣

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All I can say is, you and I, homie, are simpatico.

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🤘

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Oct 4Liked by William Pauley III

This was just as brilliant as it was horrifying.

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Kind of you to say. 😊 Thanks for reading, Hanna!

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I listened to this as I made dinner for my family, and when I heard the end of the episode I said, "WHAT????" and then realized I'd stopped paying attention to the skillet and it needed to be stirred before dinner burned.

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Ha! I love this! Hope I didn't ruin your dinner. 😜

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Not at all!

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Oct 1Liked by William Pauley III

Wow!! Fantastic!!! Loved the narration, and how the author shifted our fear for the Lieutenant to the boy! Wonderful! I'm looking forward to the next part.

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Thank you so much! Kind of you to say. Part 2 will be posted on Monday. 🫠

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Oct 1Liked by William Pauley III

Cool!!!

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"bitter and revolting—the tears of a child born inside the Eighth Block Tower. " 🤮👍

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😝

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